Quick Summary
- 7 proven copywriting frameworks
- Tested with 100,000+ cold emails
- Each framework with complete template
- Reply rates for each formula
- When to use which framework
Good copywriting = 12% reply rates. Bad copywriting = 2%.
I tested 7 copywriting frameworks with 100K emails. Here's what works.
Framework 1: PAS (Problem-Agitate-Solution)
Reply Rate: 14.2%
Best for: Pain-point driven sales
Structure:
- Identify problem
- Agitate (make it hurt)
- Present solution
Hi {{first_name}},
**PROBLEM**: Most B2B companies burn $8K/month on LinkedIn ads and get maybe 10 meetings.
**AGITATE**: That's $800 per meeting. And half don't show up. So really $1,600 per actual conversation. Brutal.
**SOLUTION**: We help companies replace LinkedIn ads with cold email. Same meetings, $200/month instead of $8K.
Just helped {{company}} cut their CAC from $890 to $127.
Worth 15 minutes?
Muhammad
Framework 2: AIDA (Attention-Interest-Desire-Action)
Reply Rate: 12.8%
Best for: Building curiosity
Hi {{first_name}},
**ATTENTION**: Saw you're hiring 3 SDRs at {{company}}.
**INTEREST**: Before you commit to $19,500/month in salaries, curious if you've explored AI alternatives?
**DESIRE**: We help companies book 100+ meetings/month with AI instead of headcount. One client went from 5 SDRs to 0 - still booking 127 meetings/month.
**ACTION**: Want to see the comparison?
Muhammad
Framework 3: BAB (Before-After-Bridge)
Reply Rate: 13.7%
Best for: Transformation stories
Hi {{first_name}},
**BEFORE**: TechCorp was booking 12 meetings/month, spending $8K on ads.
**AFTER**: Now booking 73 meetings/month, spending $890 total.
**BRIDGE**: The change? Cold email automation. Takes 2 weeks to set up, runs on autopilot.
Relevant for {{company}}?
Muhammad
Framework 4: The Question Hook
Reply Rate: 11.4%
Best for: Engagement
Hi {{first_name}},
Quick question: Are you using cold email to book sales meetings at {{company}}?
If not - you're leaving 40-100 meetings per month on the table.
We help {{industry}} companies automate outbound. Recently helped {{case_study}} go from 8 to 94 meetings/month.
Worth exploring?
Muhammad
Framework 5: Social Proof First
Reply Rate: 10.9%
Best for: Credibility building
Hi {{first_name}},
47 SaaS companies now use our cold email system, including:
• {{competitor_1}}
• {{competitor_2}}
• {{competitor_3}}
All booking 50-120 meetings/month on autopilot.
Should {{company}} be on this list?
Muhammad
Framework 6: The Direct Approach
Reply Rate: 9.8%
Best for: Busy executives
Hi {{first_name}},
We help {{industry}} companies book 40-100 meetings/month through cold email automation.
Interested?
Muhammad
Framework 7: The Case Study Lead
Reply Rate: 13.1%
Best for: Specific results
Hi {{first_name}},
We just helped {{similar_company}} (also in {{industry}}) go from 12 to 73 sales meetings per month.
They were spending $8K/month on LinkedIn ads. Now spending $890 on cold email automation.
Same revenue, 90% lower cost.
Relevant for {{company}}?
Muhammad
Which Framework to Use When
Use PAS when: Clear pain point exists
Use AIDA when: Building curiosity
Use BAB when: Have strong case study
Use Question when: Want engagement
Use Social Proof when: Have many customers
Use Direct when: Targeting C-suite
Use Case Study when: Similar company success
For complete cold email strategy, see our 16% reply rate framework.
— Muhammad
AI Agenix